2007-03-02

vg_ford: (bouncing)
2007-03-02 12:03 am
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Woohoo - go Scott!!!

Snitched from [livejournal.com profile] nightwolfrider:

New York times article on podcasting

I've never met Scott, but he's a co-DMP author, so kudos to him! Tee Morris is a good friend, though, and he's mentioned as well.

Great job, guys! And thanks to [livejournal.com profile] nightwolfrider for the link!
vg_ford: (haunted)
2007-03-02 07:32 pm
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And this is why it's good to have other people look at your hooks...

[livejournal.com profile] raleva31 critted my hook for Belladonna Dreams today...

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So I need to work in more about what a ghostwalker is, and try and get more of the twists in the plot in. *sigh* And keep it under a page in length. Not as easy as it looks.

But she's right. If you don't know that a ghostwalker can transform themselves into a ghost, and that Sapph discovers she's a Daywalker (which I realize didn't make it into the hook - bad writer!), or that Ellen is taking over and killing girls, the hook sounds...

Bland.

Bah. Back to the drawing board....