starting count: 85095
ending count: 85332
change: + 237
starting line:
She stood in the doorway, framed by a setting sun that washed her in what Diana feared might be a prophetic blood-red haze, her long black hair pulled back into a simple ponytail that showed off how young she really was.
ending line:
Nikki actually laughed at her, and Cleo snickered. “You and what army?” Nikki looked up over Chrys’ head. “Planning on summoning your Chaos Lord masters to help you, Healer?”
darling:
“I don’t think we’ve met yet,” the young woman continued, stalking forward, a sleek predator in her jeans and tee-shirt, her boot heels exclamation points to her smooth words. “My name is Nikki. I’m Death. And you’re the silly twit Madness and Lucifer have conned into helping them wreck the world, right?” She looked over at Thom. “I told you that you couldn’t hide from me.”
**
Then I went to a BBQ and my sinuses took over. *sigh* Took a night and killed things on WoW. Now I'm back to finish.
Wish me luck.
ending count: 85332
change: + 237
starting line:
She stood in the doorway, framed by a setting sun that washed her in what Diana feared might be a prophetic blood-red haze, her long black hair pulled back into a simple ponytail that showed off how young she really was.
ending line:
Nikki actually laughed at her, and Cleo snickered. “You and what army?” Nikki looked up over Chrys’ head. “Planning on summoning your Chaos Lord masters to help you, Healer?”
darling:
“I don’t think we’ve met yet,” the young woman continued, stalking forward, a sleek predator in her jeans and tee-shirt, her boot heels exclamation points to her smooth words. “My name is Nikki. I’m Death. And you’re the silly twit Madness and Lucifer have conned into helping them wreck the world, right?” She looked over at Thom. “I told you that you couldn’t hide from me.”
**
Then I went to a BBQ and my sinuses took over. *sigh* Took a night and killed things on WoW. Now I'm back to finish.
Wish me luck.