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starting line:
Edgar stepped back to the edge of the hall – Nikki had claimed the marble foyer as the only place she could spread out easily – and she rose to her feet, turning and pointing at the first candle.

ending line:
My sister.

darling:
She stood in a timeless place, in thin air; beneath her lay the chasm the spell had referred to, energies boiling and churning in a never-ending river of Power. All around her, silvery-grey cords stretched as far as her eyes could see, a living web of magic with flames at nearly every juncture. Most were small, but there were four pillars of multicolored fire, much like the orb that had consumed her.
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Something vibrated the web, and Nikki pulled her hand back from the flames.

ending line:
“You didn’t tell him about the hallucinations, did you?” she said quietly, and Chrys shook her head.

darling:
Sitting in the midst of the strands of mist sat a familiar young woman, with pastel rainbows floating in her eyes. “So you’ve taken your first steps at last,” the woman said, and the edge in her voice underscored the venom in her smile. “Welcome to our world.”
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