starting count: 82960
ending count: 84380
change: +1420
starting line:
“But do you know what the worst part is?” he asked her, and she shook her head. “Feeling, at least in a part of my soul, like they’re right.”
ending line:
Gravel crunched outside and Tony froze. Who the hell? He went into the parlor and peeked out through the curtains. A large black van stood silently in the driveway.
darling:
“The breeder is fine,” Alex snapped. “I, on the other hand, am about ready to castrate you myself and leave here, taking the child with me. Why are we still cowering here and where is my Light Mage? We need to get this experiment moving again.”
***
New ending (sort of). In approximately 2 chapters, everything is going to go boom.
Big time boom.
utilitygeek, your big moment is coming. Very soon. And yes, I will post it here as a darling. :)
ending count: 84380
change: +1420
starting line:
“But do you know what the worst part is?” he asked her, and she shook her head. “Feeling, at least in a part of my soul, like they’re right.”
ending line:
Gravel crunched outside and Tony froze. Who the hell? He went into the parlor and peeked out through the curtains. A large black van stood silently in the driveway.
darling:
“The breeder is fine,” Alex snapped. “I, on the other hand, am about ready to castrate you myself and leave here, taking the child with me. Why are we still cowering here and where is my Light Mage? We need to get this experiment moving again.”
***
New ending (sort of). In approximately 2 chapters, everything is going to go boom.
Big time boom.
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