Two sets of metrics. More later, possibly.

Last Rites
Starting Count: 0
Ending Count: 1521
Words Added: 1521

Starting Line:
Bang. Bang. Bang.

Ending Line:
Amy shuddered. “God help us all.”

Darling:
She hadn’t seen the crime scene photos yet. Body after twisted body lay on the ground, their faces a mask of pain and fear. Nikki’s victims had died peacefully, their lives stolen gently: Thom’s attack had been savage, ruthless and cold. Amy wasn’t sure which she feared more.

Olympus, Maine
Starting Count: 0
Ending Count: 1059
Words Added:1059

Starting Line:
"Where the fuck am I?"

Ending Line:
“Be good, Sisyphus,” she said, getting out and patting the Geo on its roof. “I’ll be back in a bit.”

Darling:
A mist started to creep along beside her as she drove on into the night, and Abby rolled up the window, shivering just a little. The moon had yet to rise, but the mist and the dark trees marching into the night whispered to her, and all the stupid horror movies she’d watched with her brother began to play in her head. The radio had broken about ten thousand miles ago, so all she had to occupy her was the whistling of the wind as she drove.

There was actually more done of Last Rites, but I left the stick out in the car. I'll update later.
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