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Not a lot of them, but considering I'm medicated (yay, vicodan!), I'm impressed that I got anything.
Starting Count: 17624
Ending Count: 18260
Net Gain: +636
Starting line:
Finally, the flow slowed, then ceased. Thom lay there, the rough fibers from the braided rug scratching against his unshaven cheek, feeling as if he’d been beaten with a stick. His head throbbed, full of information that he had no way of processing.
Ending line:
Once again, she didn’t answer. He wasn’t expecting one. Thom drew in one last deep breath, wiped his tears from his face, opened the door and stepped over the bodies.
Darling:
It was too easy. That dark whisper deep within him was all too willing to reach out from the depths of his soul, flowing through the wood of the door and into the guards’ feeble flesh. He felt the magic begin, changing them, infecting them. Blood curdled, twisted, streamed from every orifice, and Thom wept, again, as the guards slid down the other side of the door, dying.
Chapter 5 is done. Onwards and upwards!
Starting Count: 17624
Ending Count: 18260
Net Gain: +636
Starting line:
Finally, the flow slowed, then ceased. Thom lay there, the rough fibers from the braided rug scratching against his unshaven cheek, feeling as if he’d been beaten with a stick. His head throbbed, full of information that he had no way of processing.
Ending line:
Once again, she didn’t answer. He wasn’t expecting one. Thom drew in one last deep breath, wiped his tears from his face, opened the door and stepped over the bodies.
Darling:
It was too easy. That dark whisper deep within him was all too willing to reach out from the depths of his soul, flowing through the wood of the door and into the guards’ feeble flesh. He felt the magic begin, changing them, infecting them. Blood curdled, twisted, streamed from every orifice, and Thom wept, again, as the guards slid down the other side of the door, dying.
Chapter 5 is done. Onwards and upwards!
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