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Starting Count: 11008
Ending Count: 13502
Net Gain: +2494
Starting line:
That depends on how you define endings.
Ending line:
“No matter.” He stepped into the garden and craned his head to look at the cover of the book she held in her lap. “Carcassone’s Theories? Deep thinking indeed, Chosen.”
Darling:
Alex shrugged his shoulders. He was seated in one of the armchairs in Edgar’s library, a large book of spells open on his lap, looking like a country gentleman. They hadn’t had a chance to go out for clothing for him yet, and since they were in the Shadow Lands, he’d simply plundered the armoire in his room. Nikki had to admit he looked handsome in the ancient clothes. And dangerous. There was a rakish air to him that reminded her of Errol Flynn, for some reason. The heart of gold? Somehow, she doubted Alex had that much altruism in him.
Starting Count: 11008
Ending Count: 13502
Net Gain: +2494
Starting line:
That depends on how you define endings.
Ending line:
“No matter.” He stepped into the garden and craned his head to look at the cover of the book she held in her lap. “Carcassone’s Theories? Deep thinking indeed, Chosen.”
Darling:
Alex shrugged his shoulders. He was seated in one of the armchairs in Edgar’s library, a large book of spells open on his lap, looking like a country gentleman. They hadn’t had a chance to go out for clothing for him yet, and since they were in the Shadow Lands, he’d simply plundered the armoire in his room. Nikki had to admit he looked handsome in the ancient clothes. And dangerous. There was a rakish air to him that reminded her of Errol Flynn, for some reason. The heart of gold? Somehow, she doubted Alex had that much altruism in him.
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