(metrics) Oh look, words

[vg_ford]

Starting Count: 13502
Ending Count: 14480
Net Gain: +978

Starting line:
“I’m a scientist. We’re kin to philosophers. Deep thinking is part of our makeup.” She rested her hands on the dark leather and looked up at him. “What can I do for you, my Lord?”

Ending line:
He nodded. “One of the Three Spirits needed to cast the Cleansing. Now do you understand why we need to keep you safe?”

Darling:
Madness’ deft fingers reached into the tapestry, pulling out a small portion. “This loom is very old,” she said, spreading the piece she’d taken out so Sylvia could see it. “Almost as old as time itself. There’s always been a weaver to keep the threads straight, but the loom itself is the one who creates the fabric. Some legends say the loom is the embodiment of the creative spirit of the universe itself. We’re all here, Chosen. Every one of us has a part to play in this dance, and the loom keeps it all intact. Look here.”

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I will get this book written. I will.

Comments

[zombiegoat.livejournal.com]

Of course you will. I'm working on the edits for "Lottery Odds" (the romance novel) right now. I recommend doing the work during a baseball game... makes it feel like less of a job.

[vg-ford.livejournal.com]

Unless your team loses. Twice. In one day. *sigh*

But yeah, now that the baseball season is back, writing isn't quite as bad.