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Yes, we had metrics on Friday. I just didn't get them posted. :p
Starting count: 0
Ending count: 340
Starting line:
“Now what do we do?”
Ending line:
Moving through the twilight corridors, thunder snarling above them as the storm swirled, felt like they were caught in a b-grade horror movie. Justin kept half-expecting some mental patient in a bloody hospital gown to come around the corner, waving an axe at them, but other than the storm noise, the only sounds were the building slowly coming apart at the seams.
Darling:
see the ending line.
Yep, starting over. I got some really good crits on the first two chapters from DII, and with the outline done, I know more where I'm going. Time to pump out more words.
Starting count: 0
Ending count: 340
Starting line:
“Now what do we do?”
Ending line:
Moving through the twilight corridors, thunder snarling above them as the storm swirled, felt like they were caught in a b-grade horror movie. Justin kept half-expecting some mental patient in a bloody hospital gown to come around the corner, waving an axe at them, but other than the storm noise, the only sounds were the building slowly coming apart at the seams.
Darling:
see the ending line.
Yep, starting over. I got some really good crits on the first two chapters from DII, and with the outline done, I know more where I'm going. Time to pump out more words.
