starting count: 68392
ending count: 69214
change: +822

starting line:
It didn’t work, so she closed her eyes, trying to find her center and reassuring herself that they would fix this.

ending line:
Andreas remained curled up, but Kymara was waiting to kneel beside him, whispering words of encouragement as he shook in the aftermath of the Cleansing.

darling:
Her long blonde hair hung in hanks around her ashy face. The dark circles around her eyes looked as if they had been burned there, and long scratches marred not only her cheeks but tore her robes as well. Andreas didn’t look much better; the wounds that he’d carried for the last twenty-three years were gone, but new injuries took their place: bites and gouges along his ribs and stomach, staining his black robes with crusted blood.

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We can has a Cleansing! Well, a minor one. Now to find out how Madness reacts to this. I'm guessing badly.

Poor Lucifer.
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