(nano) Day 2: Yes, we missed Day One.

[vg_ford]

1,358 / 50,000 (2.7%)

starting count: 10672
ending count: 12030
change: +1358

starting line:
The low, gutteral roar of an industrial lawnmower woke me the next morning.

ending line:
“Bodyguard?” His deep voice was slight skeptical; even so, it sent a chill of a different kind down my spine. I’m a sucker for guys with deep voices. Even if his next words did prick my pride a bit. “Are you that important?”

darling:
A warm breeze whispered across one of my cheeks, and I could almost fancy for a moment that I could feel his touch again. He’d done that so often: cupped my face in his hands and kissed me, so gently it was barely a breath against my lips.

Comments

[asakiyume.livejournal.com]

I like both your darling and your ending line :-)

(not to dis your starting line! But I really liked your ending line)

[vg-ford.livejournal.com]

hehe. Thanks!

And yeah, starting line is boring, but it's the middle of a chapter, so there was stuff before it.

[suelder.livejournal.com]

oh, I love your darling.

There's a world of heartbreak there.

[vg-ford.livejournal.com]

Yeah. I'm definitely playing up the loss this draft. Especially since he died in her arms...