Starting Count: 282
Ending Count: 902
Net Gain: +620

Starting line:
“Spill it,” I ordered, when she came into my office a few moments later. “All of it.”

Ending line:
It’s nice, having my office be another room in my house. My day job really isn’t – I’m technically one of the two heads of Pendragon Shipping, the multinational company my grandfather created, but the position is mostly ceremonial. As my friends like to joke, I’m the Bruce Wayne of my generation. At least it’s a better comparison than Christina Onassis.

Darling:
“They’ve seen an apparition of a young woman,” Danielle said, looking over the notes she’d printed out. “And there are auditory phenomena – a young woman sobbing, crying out for her child. And something odd.”

“You mean odder than a ghost killing children?” I asked dryly, frowning at my screen.

“Funny,” she said. “Yes. Each of the children who died went the same way – wasting away. As if something was eating away at them.”

***
Oh yes. Next will be dead children, ghosts, and all sorts of lovely things.
vg_ford: (moonkitty)
( May. 17th, 2010 10:27 pm)
starting count: 0
ending count: 282
new words: 282

starting line:
"Pendragon Associates. This is Danielle, how may we assist you?"

ending line:
That comment caused me to raise one eyebrow. Danielle very rarely had to say that - the cases that were referred to us weren't ones that we'd normally turn down. This one must be a real doozy.

darling:
Danielle, however, wasn't talking much on this particular call, which was irritating, since I was trying to figure out what kind of case it was without actually picking the phone up. I could, but then what's the point of having an assistant to answer the phone?

**
No, not Rites. But words. And writing. And that is good.
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