Didn't want to post this from MiniMe, because Open Office counts words different, and I end up with weird counts. So while I'm getting everything up on the big computer, I'll post this here.
Starting Count: 934
Ending Count: 2672
Net Gain: + 1738
Current Word MTD count: 4524
Starting line:
The deck lurched beneath her as the remainders of the spell spun out into the seas around them, whipping up choppy waves.
Ending line:
But she wasn't the same girl she'd been then, and the Scorned Lady had no cabins for passengers.
Darling:
It sounded good, but she couldn’t help herself later that night, as the crew lowered the dinghy over the side, from looking up and wondering if this would be the last time she would see her ship. The full moon floated behind the masts, and for one moment, Cassandra saw, not the Scorned Lady, but Destiny’s ship of the damned. Ice crept down her spine.
**
Cutting things, and fixing the scene I stopped on last time. Amped up the tension in this episode - and you get to meet new characters!
Also, I'm considering letting Schrodinger have his own Twitter feed. What do you guys think? Should I let him inflict himself on you more often than he already does? (He's NOT getting a Facebook page unless I sell Advent Murders. I hate FB and have issues keeping up my own page, never mind his. But I could handle another Twitter account for him on my Hootsuite.)
Edited: I can see when I'm beat. His Twitter feed is MollysSchrodngr - and he already has 6 followers. *sigh* You guys are too funny!
Starting Count: 934
Ending Count: 2672
Net Gain: + 1738
Current Word MTD count: 4524
Starting line:
The deck lurched beneath her as the remainders of the spell spun out into the seas around them, whipping up choppy waves.
Ending line:
But she wasn't the same girl she'd been then, and the Scorned Lady had no cabins for passengers.
Darling:
It sounded good, but she couldn’t help herself later that night, as the crew lowered the dinghy over the side, from looking up and wondering if this would be the last time she would see her ship. The full moon floated behind the masts, and for one moment, Cassandra saw, not the Scorned Lady, but Destiny’s ship of the damned. Ice crept down her spine.
**
Cutting things, and fixing the scene I stopped on last time. Amped up the tension in this episode - and you get to meet new characters!
Also, I'm considering letting Schrodinger have his own Twitter feed. What do you guys think? Should I let him inflict himself on you more often than he already does? (He's NOT getting a Facebook page unless I sell Advent Murders. I hate FB and have issues keeping up my own page, never mind his. But I could handle another Twitter account for him on my Hootsuite.)
Edited: I can see when I'm beat. His Twitter feed is MollysSchrodngr - and he already has 6 followers. *sigh* You guys are too funny!