Daily Wordcount

[vg_ford]

28,003 / 100,000 (27.0%)

Word Goal for the day: 750 - made 1043

Starting line: -Because it’s not time yet,- she replied. –We have to finish everything we started.-

Ending line: As the last of the blue dissolved, my breathing slowed, and I opened my eyes to see David and Kate waiting anxiously.

Darling: Ellen was younger than Anne, with full, pouty lips and a face that was simultaneously prettily innocent and madly jaded. A good trick – I was impressed.

and

I could smell that sweetness on her breath, like a decaying flower; whatever it was, it was nauseating.

Deaths: Nope.

Good Things: Um, neat metaphors?

Bad Things: Ellen's just as bad as Sapph fears. Maybe worse.

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I have avoided mocking! At least for today! :D

However, I'm not happy with what I wrote. Well, as far as it goes, I'm happy. But it needs more.

Bah.

Oh, and I had to defriend novel_in_90; I can't be wading through that much stuff on my flist. But I'll still be posting every day!

Comments

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I'm hoping so. I'll be checking every day to see how it's doing. :P