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Word Goal for the day: 750 - made 1043
Starting line: -Because it’s not time yet,- she replied. –We have to finish everything we started.-
Ending line: As the last of the blue dissolved, my breathing slowed, and I opened my eyes to see David and Kate waiting anxiously.
Darling: Ellen was younger than Anne, with full, pouty lips and a face that was simultaneously prettily innocent and madly jaded. A good trick – I was impressed.
and
I could smell that sweetness on her breath, like a decaying flower; whatever it was, it was nauseating.
Deaths: Nope.
Good Things: Um, neat metaphors?
Bad Things: Ellen's just as bad as Sapph fears. Maybe worse.
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I have avoided mocking! At least for today! :D
However, I'm not happy with what I wrote. Well, as far as it goes, I'm happy. But it needs more.
Bah.
Oh, and I had to defriend
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