And done! I've finished a short story!!!
starting count: 725
ending count: 1708
change: +938
starting line:
I unpacked our late supper: crackers, brie cheese and smoked sausage slices, along with chocolate-covered strawberries, raspberries and of course, the bottle of wine.
ending line:
And I cried.
darling:
The moon rose higher as we made love, the river a counterpoint to the plaintive songs of the whippoorwills and our own intimate sounds. Time had fallen away, lost in the fog, and we were the center of our own universe.
***
It's a weird, violent little tale. I really liked the prompt and the way it came out. There may be more on this, depending on stuff. :D
Yes, I'll say more later.
But I FINISHED A SHORT STORY!!!!
starting count: 725
ending count: 1708
change: +938
starting line:
I unpacked our late supper: crackers, brie cheese and smoked sausage slices, along with chocolate-covered strawberries, raspberries and of course, the bottle of wine.
ending line:
And I cried.
darling:
The moon rose higher as we made love, the river a counterpoint to the plaintive songs of the whippoorwills and our own intimate sounds. Time had fallen away, lost in the fog, and we were the center of our own universe.
***
It's a weird, violent little tale. I really liked the prompt and the way it came out. There may be more on this, depending on stuff. :D
Yes, I'll say more later.
But I FINISHED A SHORT STORY!!!!
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