[livejournal.com profile] suelder, you are going to shiver when you see what you've wrought. More words on "The Sun Never Sets," and a very chilling ending indeed.

Starting Count: 5170
Ending Count: 5382
Net Gain: +212
Current Word MTD count: 2150
And now it's off to the editors! So you get metrics for the day!

Starting Count: 2169
Ending Count: 3630
Net Gain: +1461
Current Word MTD count: 10986


Starting line:
The Tower’s interior was black as coal, and they paused for a few moments to allow their eyes to adjust.

Ending line:
The End (yeah, yeah, I know, deal)

Darling:
Nothing that's not spoilery.
Just a quick hit with my stats from yesterday, since I got lost in WoW and forgot to post them. :P


Starting Count: 747
Ending Count: 2169
Net Gain: +1422
Current Word MTD count: 9535


Starting line:
They all paused at a middle landing, trying to catch their breath. Then Isaac looked around and his breath fled again.

Ending line:
The Tower’s interior was black as coal.

Darling:
Along the bottom, written in gilt letters, was a Latin inscription. Isaac knelt down and murmured, “Domine Salvam Fac Reginam Nostram Victoriam Primam.” Then, when Andrew frowned at him, he translated, “Oh Lord, keep safe our Queen Victoria the First. Good lord, man, did your tutor teach you nothing?”

“I learned other things than Latin,” Andrew replied.

“I should hope so, since your classical training is hideous,” Isaac retorted.

“That’s why we’re partners,” Andrew said. “You have the book learning, and I’ve the money. It’s a perfect match.”
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